Itchy House Films is an independent production company created in 2005
by Jay Rodriguez.
We primarily focus on digital entertainment accomplishing short films
and commercials.
We intend to shoot a feature length film in 2007.
Keep an eye out!
Jay Rodriguez
Itchy House Films Founder and Director
So, what exactly is a Narrative film?
The narrative film uses filmed reality to tell a fictional
story. Film scholars consider the narrative film to be one of the major
modes of filmmaking, along with the experimental film and the documentary
film (and arguably animation).
Then what is a Documentary film?
Documentary film is a broad category of cinematic expression united
by the intent to remain factual or non-fictional.
And- an Experimental film?
An experimental film is a film organized neither as narrative fiction
nor as non-fiction. As such, film scholars consider the experimental
or avant-garde film to be one of the major modes of filmmaking, along
with the narrative film, the documentary film and arguably animation.
ADVENTURES IN JUDGING
FILM SUBMISSIONS
By Elizabeth English
15 Suggestions to Better Your Chances of Winning,
When Entering Film Festivals & Filmmaking Competitions
Suggestion #1: SEND YOUR SUBMISSIONS IN EARLY!
Don't wait until the final deadline date! Your submission can
be buried in a pile or boxes of hundreds or thousands at the bigger
festivals and competitions. The previews could be hurried. Maybe the
film jury or programmer or creative executive saw a film sent in earlier
and has decided that's his or her favorite narrative, documentary or
animation.
Suggestion #2: TWO WORDS: GOOD PACKAGING.
Your DVD or VHS tape may be roughly handled, by three or four
people or more. It will be stored and stacked on shelves or in boxes
for perhaps months. Make sure it looks good, will hold up, and will
play perfectly each time it's previewed through all of that!
DO NOT use shredded paper (or kapok) -filled envelopes for mailing
your submission! Use bubble wrap envelopes or wrap your DVD or VHS tape
in bubble wrap. Kapok-filled envelopes are a mess when opened at the
film festival, spreading fluffy powdered paper all over the office floor
and the person opening the envelope. It also damages DVDs and VHS tapes.
Use the simplest packaging form possible, one that's easy and
quick to open. Don't tape it together as if the contents were made of
gold.
Postage: use enough postage to cover the cost of mailing. Most
festivals and competitions will not pay the postage due, and your entry
will probably be returned to you, un-opened.
If you're sending your submission from another country other
than where the film festival office is located, always indicate on the
customs declaration label that the contents of the package are a commercial
sample, or of no commercial value. No festival wants to pay customs
duties to receive your submission.
If you want a confirmation that your submission was received,
please send (with your submission package) an SASP, which is an attached
post card with US postage (if entering a US competition) or get a delivery
confirmation sticker from any US post office. Write on the postcard:
your name and address in the mail-to area, and on the back or in the
message area, write: (name of festival) has received the film (title
of your entry) on this date_________.
Do not send an SASE (self-addressed, stamped envelope) with your
submission if the festival or competition announces that they will not
return any entries or submissions. You'll be wasting the postage.
DVD PACKAGING: The best, most professional way to package your
DVD is in a regular DVD box like you get when you buy a movie on DVD.
A jewel box type of packaging is also acceptable, but not
preferred, and little paper envelopes are unprofessional at best, and
may get lost in the shuffle. When using a DVD box, have a paper label
inside the plastic covering. A label that goes all around; front, back
and one side. Be sure the film's title is on the side edge, too, not
just the front. Festivals stack the hundreds or thousands of DVDs they
receive on shelves or in boxes, and they need to be able to see the
title on the edge. Don't expect the contest to label your film for you.
VHS TAPE PACKAGING: Most festivals and contest no longer want
VHS tapes, but if you have to send one, the best, most professional
way to package your VHS tape is in a regular plastic VHS tape box like
you get when you buy a movie on VHS. And with a paper label inside the
plastic covering. A label that goes all around; front, back and one
side. Be sure the film's title is on the side edge, too, not just the
front. The VHS tape itself should also have a label on the face of the
tape and on the side. Festivals stack the hundreds or thousands of DVDs
or VHS tapes they receive on shelves or in boxes, and they need to be
able to see the title on the edge. Don't expect the contest to label
your film for you.
Entry forms and release forms: Please fill them out CLEARLY in
black ink. Sign them. Print them, if possible, rather than using fancy
cursive writing in purple or pink ink. Make sure your e-mail address
is clear. If you have a mix of zeros (0) and the letter O, make sure
they can be read for what they are. Same with the letter I & 1,
or L & lower-case l. They all look the same sometimes, so be clear,
if you ever want to hear from the festival again. An e-mail address
like this: OO0011Ill@aol.com is hard to figure out.
Remember to enclose the entry form, release form and entry fee
with your script in the same envelope, unless you submitted via WAB.
Read the contest's or film festival's guidelines, and follow
them!
Make sure your entire submission package is user-friendly!
Suggestion #3: LABELING THE DVD OR VHS TAPE:
Scrawling the film's title on the DVD face with a marker pen
is not acceptable, and looks immediately unprofessional. No label at
all on VHS tapes? It happens all the time. You should label your DVD
or VHS tape with a paper label that has been printed out and is readable.
Label the box, label the outside edge, and label the face of
the DVD or VHS tape. Why expect the film festival to label your DVD
or VHS tape for you?
Suggestion #4: LABELING DETAILS:
Print the film's title, running time, whether it's NTSC or PAL,
director's name, contact info: e-mail address and website URL on the
DVD or VHS tape label. (If you change your address, phone number or
e-mail address, please let the festival know this right away, so they
can contact you if you win! Also send or include e-mail addresses for
co-directors and producers and screenwriters on your film, to be notified
of the film's status in the contest.)
Include the same information (above) on the box the DVD or VHS
tape comes in.
If you have a www.withoutabox.com (WAB) tracking number, include
that number on the DVD or VHS tape label and the box. Don't just write
the WAB tracking number on the mailing envelope, and expect the film
festival to notice it when opening the envelope.
Suggestion #5: ENTRY FEES:
If sending a check or money order for your entry fee, attach
it to a cover letter or the entry form. Don't just drop it down inside
the mailing envelope. It may not be seen when the contents are removed.
When sending a check from someone else, write your name on it
so we know what film it's for. * If you submitted your film and paid
the entry fee via WAB, please print out and include the WAB entry confirmation
page with your submission.
You probably shouldn't ask the film festival or contest to waive
or discount the entry fees. You spent all your funding on the film's
production, and have none left for entry fees? Every film festival and
contest has heard that many times. You should always set aside entry
fee money, as a vital part of financing the film, so you can submit
your film to contests and get it seen! The film festival needs your
entry fees in order to operate the contest and run the festival screenings.
Suggestions: Do without a few take-out pizzas, forget having
a couple of manicures, rent a DVD rather than spending the money on
theater tickets and popcorn, take a bus instead of a cab (or walk),
have a yard-sale and save the profits for entry fees, and/or sell something
on E-bay and use the money for entry fees. In other words, don't ask
the film festival to financially support your film more than they already
do.
Suggestion #6: MEDIA KITS AND PRODUCTION STILLS:
Don't send media releases, production stills, director's statements,
crew and cast lists, photos, and other paper or CD documentation with
your submission unless the contest absolutely requires it to be included
with your submission. If they decide to screen your film, the programmer
will ask for it then. Most film juries just want to preview your film
without any prior informationjust as an audience would.
Don't send in long resumés and lists of credits or info
about your other festival wins with your entry forms and submission,
unless the contest requires it. It won't help you win. It won't (or
shouldn't) influence the judges, because each festival has different
criteria. And consider the festival's boxes of hundreds of unneeded
media packages and production stills that have to be sifted through
to find the ones that go with the films selected!
Suggestion #7: CHECK EACH DVD or VHS TAPE before sending
it out.
Take the time to watch the whole film to be sure it doesn't skip,
stop, freeze, jump, can be fast-forwarded, etc., and that the sound
is good. Don't expect the contest to let you know your DVD or VHS tape
is no good, and to ask you for a replacement copy, and then to preview
it again. Generally, you only get one chance to shine. Be sure that
each DVD or VHS tape plays perfectly!
Make sure your DVD or VHS tape starts at the beginning of the
film. Film juries don't want to waste time by watching leading color
strips and countdowns and sound checks! The festival programmer and
screenings coordinator do not want to do the extra work of trying to
avoid all that if they select your film for screening.
Suggestion # 8: SHOW UP!
If your film is selected for screening, make every effort to
attend the entire film festival, to show support for the other filmmakers
whose films will be screened, and to show your appreciation to the festival
director, staff and crew, and the jury that selected your film.
At the film festival, introduce yourself to the festival director,
the programmer and the screenings coordinator. Let them know how to
contact you by phone or cell-phone during the festival.
Be prepared for a short Q & A session either before or after
your screening, if the programmer offers that. And thank the festival
and the audience for the opportunity to show them your work.
If possible, bring your film's stars and talent with you. Audiences
just love to see and meet actors and others involved with a film they
enjoyed watching. And showing up just might get the actors and other
crew positions on films by other directors!
Suggestion # 9: MARKETING YOUR FILM AT A FILM FESTIVAL:
Do have posters and postcards or flyers about your film to leave
at the festival's free literature tables, and elsewhere around town.
Be sure the screening time, date and venue location is correct on your
PR pieces.
You might want to consider arriving a day ahead of the festival
dates to place your info around town.
Have plenty of business cards, with the film's title on them,
available to pass out to everyone you meet. Get as many business cards
from others as you can. You may need those contacts some day very soon.
AND NOW FOR THE CREATIVE STUFF:
Suggestion #10: TITLES & LOGLINES:
Have a fabulous, unique movie? That's wonderful, but you need
to know how to create a great title, and how to turn your great story
into a great logline.
But be sure to go to IMDb.com first to see if your title has
been used before. IMDb.com has a listing of every film produced from
the 1800s to today's films and those that are in pre-production and
production.
There is, and always has been, only one real secret to success
as a filmmaker in the entertainment industry. Tell a great story. Period.
Whether your film is a narrative feature or short, a documentary or
animation. And you need to figure out how to tell that fabulous story,
and sell it, with a fabulous title and a logline of only
25 words or less!
Your first impression to the film industry movers and shakers
is all about the fine art of pitching your film, via your eye-catching
title and logline. Give your film a great, imaginative and unique title!
A memorable title that immediately makes the film jury and audiences
need to see this film.
Don't simply summarize your movie with set-up, conflict, and
resolution. Don't just write a one-sentence TV Guide-style logline emphasizing
the main storyline. Don't limit yourself to the plotline. Don't write
that the story is exciting, amazing, a blockbuster.
Never describe the little details of your film in the logline, nor leave
out important information. Try not to use your characters' names in
a logline.
Do emphasize the unique elements of your film that enable audiences
and film juries to connect with the situation and to identify with the
film's protagonist.
You've got to cram a lot into a short, two- or three-sentence
logline: genre, conflict, character, action, location, time, any crisis
to be resolved, hint at the potential transformation of the main character,
marketability, and do it all in 25 words or less, and all in present
tense. And it needs to sizzle! The title and logline are the keys that
open the door to getting your film a good preview. The same amount of
thought that a director takes in creating a film should also be taken
in deciding on a title and writing the logline.
Sell the sizzle; not just the steak! A great title
for your film is the first (and maybe only) introduction to a contest
jury, an agent, a producer, or studio. You've got 3 minutes; pitch
me what you've got, is what you'll hear from the entertainment
industry movers & shakers who might buy and distribute your project.
But you probably wouldn't even get that meeting or a reply to your query
letter, if you didn't have an interesting title and logline that caught
their eye.
The audience reading the festival program, and the film jury,
should know immediately what the whole movie is about and get excited
about the story-line and idea, and can visualize the film. Use that
title and logline to sell your film to them, and make them
want to buy tickets to your film's screening!
Suggestion #11: ROLLING CREDITS:
When adding the film's credits to your film, consider the film
festival audience and the film jury. Don't make the credits so long
that anyone viewing your film gets bored! Don't have all your credits
at the beginning. Don't add 3 minutes at the end for credits. Keep it
going as fast as possible.
Create your credits in an interesting way. Make them appropriate
to the genre and theme of the film. Consider running the above-the-line
credits (stars, DP, editor, producer, screenwriter, director) over the
first scenes. For end credits, or below-the-line crew and cast, try
adding music from the film to keep the viewers' attention and interest.
The credits are a part of your film; why blow it off?
Suggestion #12: THE FIRST 5 MINUTES:
Do you realize that most film juries only watch 5 to 10 minutes
of your film at the first previews? That's right. Say the jury has 100
feature films to preview. At a minimum of one hour each, that's 100
hours. So they watch a few minutes of each film, then maybe they'll
fast-forward it a bit, to decide which films they want to see all the
way through. Can you get them to watch the rest of your film, after
they've only seen the first few minutes of it?
Make sure those first few minutes are focussed on the storyline,
are super interesting, well-edited, and well-filmed, invisibly edited,
perfectly and professionally acted and beautifully directed, and have
a great film score to attract attention and to describe
the theme and story.
Clicheéd opening scenes are death to a film. How many
times have you seen poorly-thought-out films that open with this scene:
a dark bedroom, an alarm clock rings, a hand reaches out to turn it
off, the clock falls on the floor, and the actor sits up in bed, turns
on a light, and rubs his or her eyes? Or how about this boring opening
scene: anonymous feet walk along a hall, down the stairs, out the door,
along the sidewalk and get into a car? Or the opening scene where the
camera pans along a long hallway or table full of photographs, hoping
to introduce the viewer to the family or the protagonist. Shocking opening
scenes of blood-and-guts action by an unknown person or persons doesn't
work, either.
Just like a screenplay, your film must show (not tell) the who,
what, when, where and why of the story in those first few precious
scenes. The how and any plot details or twists can come
later in the film.
The worst thing that can happen, if and when your film is selected
for screening at a film festival, is that some of the audience members
get up and walk out of your film. Festival directors and programmers
are embarrassed, and you'll have to slink out when it's over. Don't
let that happen! Do your creative utmost to hook the viewers from the
beginning, and keep them happy and interested for the rest of the film,
and satisfied at the climax. (It's a lot like sex
)
Suggestion #13: CONTENT & STRUCTURE:
As for the content of your film, selecting a good script with
a great story is your first job. Documentaries and animation films need
scripts, too!
Story Structure:
ACT I: who is the protagonist and what is his/her story? Set
up a dilemma for protagonist. Introduce the characters. End of Act I:
most conflict, protagonist is ready to change to new direction.
ACT II: This is where the real story begins, and
is the longest part of your film. A story is built around an active
protagonist who struggles against primarily external forces of antagonism
to pursue his or her desire, through continuous time, within a consistent
and causally connected fictional reality. (From Robert McKee's
Story: Substance, Structure, Style, and the Principles of Screenwriting)
ACT II: Filmmakers sometimes have a lot of
trouble with Act II. It can seem monotonous, episodic, or aimless. This
may be because they've conceived of it as a series of obstacles to the
hero's final goal, rather than as a dynamic series of events leading
up to and trailing away from the central moment of death and rebirth.
(from Chris Vogler's, The Writer's Journey)
OK. End of Act II. Crisis at high point, realization has set
in for protagonist, confrontation with antagonist coming up, moment
of truth about to occur, movie moment happens.
ACT III, no more than fifteen minutes long, resolving
all conflicts, yadda, yadda, yadda. What's the hardest part of the film
to shoot well? The ending. The climax usually happens about one to three
scenes from the end of the script, followed by a short resolution that
ties up all loose ends. The big finish, the problem is resolved, the
question is answered, the tension lets up, and we know everything will
be all right!
DIRECTING THE FILM: Make sure you've clearly defined
your characters and that the actors have given them unique qualities
special to them, so they are recognizable as individual people and have
depth.
DIALOG: Same with the dialog. Don't have every actor's character
speak the same. Or as they normally speak. Direct the actors to make
each character unique, yet believable. Don't let actors merely read
their lines.
ENVIRONMENT & AMBIENCE: Let the environment and ambience
of the settings be shown. Show weather and seasons and times of day
or night. Make sure your characters visibly REACT to each other, to
actions and events, and to dialog spoken to them.
CONFLICT: Have conflict, whether personal, local, national, or
world-wide...or even universal. Then resolve that conflict at the end.
CLICHÉS: Avoid too many clichés in characterizations,
dialog, actions and reactions. Do something new and interesting.
DIALOG & ACTION: Every word of dialog and every scene of
action and exposition in your film must move the story forward toward
its inevitable or surprising conclusion. Every scene must move the story
forward. The film should read like a good novel, be fast-paced,
and the viewer should not want to stop watching your film until the
satisfying end.
Avoid like the plague having your actors speak long lines of
exposition! Actors and directors and the audience hate to hear a character
verbally explaining what he or she is thinking, planning, worrying about,
or is going to do, or did in the past. Action! Show it, don't tell it!
TRANSITIONS: Remember transitions. Each scene should flow into
the next, logically, or be hinted at in a previous scene. Don't make
the viewer wonder where we are in this scene. Lead them into it. If
your two characters will be going out for pizza in the next scene, or
are going to rob a bank, hint at that in the previous scene(s). Set
it up for the pay-off. You can have many set-ups and pay-offs, all moving
the story forward and building toward the ending pay-off, which resolves
the conflict
Suggestion #14 : PRODUCTION VALUES: The elements that
make your film believable to the audience:
EDITING: Editing, although it's probably the most important aspect
of making a good film, should be invisible to the audience. In simplest
terms, editing, or cutting, is about juxtaposition of elements in filmed
coverage. The key part of a film editor's job is to make his or her
own contribution as imperceptible as possible. The film should be seamless.
Editors select, tighten, pace, embellish, arrange and translate the
director's vision into a movie; taking a mess of chaotic bits and pieces
that seem to defy continuity, and many hours of raw footage, and turn
it into a cohesive story, letting the director's filmed material guide
the editor. Film editing should not call attention to itself, nor strive
to impress.
FRAMING SCENES: Vital to the visual enjoyment of your film. Artistically
framing scenes and actors in a way that makes the viewer feel a part
of the scene or story and to be visually stimulated, is important, of
course, but unique framing can also define a film director's, DP's,
or a cinematographer's unique visual style.
LIGHTING: Make sure the lighting is correct for both exterior
and interior scenes. Your film should not be blue-ish because you didn't
use a filter. The lighting should not change abruptly from room to room
in interior shots. The actors should be lighted well. There should not
be shadows on the walls of interiors, even though they do exist in reality.
Shadows on walls are a major distraction, unless you're doing a horror
film. Lighting quality can make or break a film.
SOUND: Sound should be even, and be appropriate to the scene.
Actors speaking dialog should be clearly heard and understood. Action
scenes should not blast the viewer's ears. Don't jump from soft to loud
without a transition in sound. Remember room ambience in sound. Interior
and exterior shots need subtle background sounds to be believable.
SET DESIGN & PROPS: Sets and props are so important to the
smooth enjoyment of your film. Make sure you have chosen visually interesting
sets, and have props be real and believable.
LOCATIONS: Always choose locations, for every scene and shot
for their visual, aural and cinematic appeal.
WARDROBE, HAIR & MAKEUP: Bad choices here can ruin an otherwise
fine film. Get professionals who know how to do wardrobe, hair and makeup
for film! Be sure your crew knows exactly what you want to see, and
can accomplish the job for whatever population, location, period or
era your story is in. These elements are completely different than they
are for everyday use, and show up badly on film if not done well.
FILM SCORE: Use the power of music in film! Music is one of the
most important elements in a film, and it can be creatively and artfully
used to arouse, to manipulate, to frighten, or to soothe & calm,
to aid in transitions, to punctuate a special moment, to comment, to
move plot along, to focus, to add sense of continuity, to add information,
to heighten tempo, add dramatic tension, to change mood, to add character
and to define it, to be a theme for the film, as well as to add dimension
and give the film a new or different meaning.
RUNNING TIMES: A short narrative or documentary should be up
to 30 minutes. A feature is up to 60 minutes, or 120 minutes, max. For
the film festival circuit, a short 33- or feature 68-minute film's run
time makes the programmer's life difficult, trying to slot your film
into the tight screening schedule. Many a good film has been dumped
at the last minute from a festival screening schedule because it was
a few minutes too long.
All of the above suggestions hold true for short-short, short,
feature narrative, documentary and animation films!
Wait! I'm just shooting a low-budget short indie film!
you say? Well, all of the elements of packaging and content listed above
remain the same for your film as for a high-budget feature film from
a major studio, IF you want to have your film screened at a top film
festival, and win.
And finally, Suggestion #15:The more professional and
viewer-friendly your entire submission package is, the better your chances
are of winning a competition, getting your film screened at the festival,
and of selling that film or getting distribution. Remember, when entering
a competition, if your film wins or is a finalist, or is even a semi-finalist,
distributors, producers and agents will ask you for it, and the festival
will want to be proud to have selected your film!
2005 ELIZABETH ENGLISH
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